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Sorry about the delay on chapter two.... Well anyways, here is the link to chapter one if আপনি missed it.
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Where we left off....
"Hey, what are আপনি doing?!" A prisoner shouted. আরো heads of prisoners turned to him. They ran to him, but it was too late. He placed the bottle in the middle of the pentagram and started murmuring strange sounds under his breath. The bottle started glowing and shaking. Finally, the deep scarlet turned into a deep green. He picked up the bottle and started drinking.
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THE EGGMAN MECH whatched as the train passed by; then he threw a sticky bomb on it and set the timer for 3:00. The bot flew off.


Trance let Windy go.
"Were are আপনি guys going?" he asked Windy.
"Wherever the train takes us."
Trance laughed.
"Same as always eh? I'm glad to see that আপনি brought along your boyfreind Spike."
Windy turned a little red in the face.
"He is NOT my boyfreind!"
"Is too"
"Is not!"
"Too!"
"NOT!"
"To!"
They argued for some time.
"NOT!!!!!" Windy yelled while covering her face trying not to giggle a bit.
Trance looked at Spike.
"Just joking around a little!"
Spike didn't answer. He thought...

THEY STOOD WAITING for the train. They were at an opening far into the wood.
Spike bent over to dig out something golden. He found it was a power ring, but it felt different.
It had a different aura.
Spike slipped it into his pocket.
"We're just gonna JUMP on a moving train?!" yelled out Windy, unaware that she was trembeling like an aspen leaf.
Storm looked at her.
"Do আপনি wanna take antoher chance of flying?"
Windy froze. Then she found herself inching twoard Spike almost in a gesture of protection.
In the distance a train whistle cried. This made Kitty a bit আরো alert.
The train sped by. They all...

"This is were I found the blanket Emily." AJ ব্যক্ত to Emily. "Ok thank আপনি AJ."Emily ব্যক্ত to AJ only to find out that she was gone."She left me! But why?" Emily was mad now, she then heard something."Foot steps, must be Jisseca!""EMILY HELP!" Jisseca ব্যক্ত yelling out.""It is Jisseca! I need to save her!" Emily almost yelled out, but did it some thing was blocking her mouth."Shhh.... Don't make a sound." Some one ব্যক্ত in a whisper voice. Then she was sleeping, but thinking:"Who was it? Was it AJ? No. Was it Sonic? No but it was some thing blue! Sonic, AJ who else? Star, no she's yellow. But who...

First off...This is just an opinion. >:/ Don't bash me just because your character is a Gary-Stu অথবা Mary-Sue. That is YOUR fault for designing your character that way.

Now, there are many Gary-Stus and Mary-Sues EVERYWHERE. If আপনি don't know the whole issue, here's some প্রশ্ন I will answer;

What is a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu?
A Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu is a character that has many abilities, has no flaws, AND everybody loves them. The real name for these types of characters are a godmodder. A Mary-Sue is a female godmodder, and a Gary-Stu is a male.

Why are they bad?
They are unoriginal, overdone, and...

As the শিয়াল noisily sloshed through the muck and rain,he thought of where he was going.The Science Centre,which was almost abandoned,except for the mad scientist he worked for.It had been closed down not even a মাস ago,still in good shape,which is why Dr. একপ্রকার গায়ক পক্ষী inhabits it.Dr. একপ্রকার গায়ক পক্ষী was claimed to be the most insane man in the world, but the শিয়াল wouldn't believe it.Never.
He knew he was close.He could already see the very শীর্ষ of the centre,a dark,metallic dome.The young শিয়াল knew his mentor was working on a secret project,because even he wasn't allowed to see it.He had only caught glimpses...

Character Chart
Character's full name: Ningizzida the Hedgehog.
Reason অথবা meaning of name: Named after the Assirian god of snakes and serpents, unknown why.
Character's nickname: Giz.
Reason for nickname: One of his alleys started calling him that for awhile, but it never
really stuck. Ningizzida prefers his whole name.
Birth date: Unknown.

Physical appearance
Age: Ancient.
How old does he/she appear: 18-22.
Weight: Around 85 lbs.
Height: 3"8
Body build: Slender, sleek, and built for speed and agility over power. Has well develouped
calf muscles.
Shape of face: n/a
Eye color: Blood red, with...

“… There might have been a time when আপনি actually thought about others, but now it’s just become, ‘Get the villain out of the way and be proclaimed as a hero once more!’ I just don’t want আপনি to become something that আপনি don’t want to be.” – Lil the Cat from “The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul.”

Do আপনি remember the first time আপনি ever drew your অনুরাগী character? When আপনি created him/her, আপনি had thought everything out; who they dated, what they wore, and if they had any powers. Believe me when I say that অনুরাগী characters are the best characters in the world. Their stories...

Garinina's POV

I stared at the young woman, thoughts running through my mind. How did she obtain that bruise on her forehead...when she is facing up? There is no obvious evidence that she hit her head on the tub. Unless...she was moved or...she didn't die in the bath.

I stared long and hard at the rather large bruise on her forehead, and I noticed something was not normal about it.

I touched her forehead, it felt unusually hard. It did not feel like skull. Curious, I pulled out a scalpel and began slowly cutting the skin of her forehead; this earned a surprised and sickened gasp from my new...

    Once we saw that there was another Earthquake around, we decided to find out what was going on. “I can’t believe that there is another me out there.” Earthquake mused.
    “At least we know it isn’t you.” I said.
    “Maybe there’s only a double of আপনি and Scorch.”
    “Maybe, and maybe not, Blaster.” Earthquake said.
    I bet there is another Blaster out there. I thought. I started to walk away when Earthquake and Blaster came and followed me.
    As...

WINDY LOOKED DOWN AT her dearest freind; there was no way he was going to survive.
But Windy had to try.
The Tornado2 was losing altitude quickly, even though Tails was trying all he could. Windy kicked the arch window.
Once. Twice.
On the third kick a small crack opened.
She kicked once more.
The glass shatered. Tails looked back, but Windy was already gone. He couldn't stop her. He then saw one of eggman's mechs, and it was pointing the gun right at him.
"No, please!"
A Gunshot echoed through the air.
Windy payed it no mind. She was on full alert to find Spike. She hit the water. When she came back...

Chapter three: Messages Part two: Sender
Location: New Legion base
Date: Thursday, December 21st 4337
“…And আপনি are sure that the project made these events occur?” A tall echidna, wearing a sort of uniform asked, a hooded echidna, as they both walked through a string of dark hallways.
“Ahm certain, sir.” A Tocktin (Cockney British) accented echidna under the hood, answered. “Not only that, but my guess’is, that she does remembah one bloomin thing. I mean, being from that past world and all.”
“Indeed.” The taller one replied. “Well at least we still have that back-up Phantis...