Ok I'll give you a sneak peak of the first chapter without revisions
Chapter 1
Percy's POv
My head throbbed, it felt like it was going to explode any minute. Where am I? I thought, more importantly who am I. I was lying on the grass, it had dandelions sticking out. It was so peaceful but i could hear battle cries. I looked up and saw something that was beautiful but scary,it was scary because it was breathing fire all over the place. It was beautiful because it was bronze bulls. Two bronze bulls very beautifully carved and shaped, automans. How I knew that I had no clue but when i saw them it stirred something in my mind. A six foot tall kid with one eye fighting the same bronze bulls. Then I heard the scariest cry and i went back to reality. A seven year old in full armor under the bull. They were across the stream, then I did the craziest thing in my life, i ran toward them. I ran through the stream, while I was in the stream I felt more powerful for some reason but i didn't have time to think about it. The bull was ready to blow the fire but then I had this feeling in my gut. I let it lose. The whole stream behind me rose up and extinguished the flames before it reached the kid. If a fire breathing bronze bull could be in shock this one was. While it was in shock I jumped on its back. I found the control panel on the back of its head and yanked out some wires then the bull shut down. The other bull was at full charge straight at me but while it was passing through two huge statues it seemed to slow down like some wind was pushing on it. When it passed through the statues it had no problem getting to me, but it was already taken care of because like 50 kids ran up to it and attacked. The oldest was probably 19 the youngest probably seven 7. Then the bull ran away. They stared at me in awe but then a girl about 16 with brown hair pulled into a ponytail and soft blue eye she was well built and pretty except for the sword in her hand which was about to slice me in half. I let my instincts take over. I pulled out a pen. She stopped and started laughing.
-What are you going to do write on me? Oh no please don' do that I'm so scared. She said with sarcasum.
Then I uncapped it and her laugh turned into a sneer.
-So you want to challenge me?
Ill post the rest later .
Chapter 1
Percy's POv
My head throbbed, it felt like it was going to explode any minute. Where am I? I thought, more importantly who am I. I was lying on the grass, it had dandelions sticking out. It was so peaceful but i could hear battle cries. I looked up and saw something that was beautiful but scary,it was scary because it was breathing fire all over the place. It was beautiful because it was bronze bulls. Two bronze bulls very beautifully carved and shaped, automans. How I knew that I had no clue but when i saw them it stirred something in my mind. A six foot tall kid with one eye fighting the same bronze bulls. Then I heard the scariest cry and i went back to reality. A seven year old in full armor under the bull. They were across the stream, then I did the craziest thing in my life, i ran toward them. I ran through the stream, while I was in the stream I felt more powerful for some reason but i didn't have time to think about it. The bull was ready to blow the fire but then I had this feeling in my gut. I let it lose. The whole stream behind me rose up and extinguished the flames before it reached the kid. If a fire breathing bronze bull could be in shock this one was. While it was in shock I jumped on its back. I found the control panel on the back of its head and yanked out some wires then the bull shut down. The other bull was at full charge straight at me but while it was passing through two huge statues it seemed to slow down like some wind was pushing on it. When it passed through the statues it had no problem getting to me, but it was already taken care of because like 50 kids ran up to it and attacked. The oldest was probably 19 the youngest probably seven 7. Then the bull ran away. They stared at me in awe but then a girl about 16 with brown hair pulled into a ponytail and soft blue eye she was well built and pretty except for the sword in her hand which was about to slice me in half. I let my instincts take over. I pulled out a pen. She stopped and started laughing.
-What are you going to do write on me? Oh no please don' do that I'm so scared. She said with sarcasum.
Then I uncapped it and her laugh turned into a sneer.
-So you want to challenge me?
Ill post the rest later .