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Okay I've already started to write it but I'm wondering if I should keep going?

The Story's called Millions Of Miles Apart and it's about a girl named Sunflower who has Albinism and she's never been loved দ্বারা anyone but one দিন a strange voice appears out of no where...Here's the first chapter!

Millions of Miles Apart

From the moment your born somewhere out there আপনি have a true love. At less that’s what they say? They say there’s one person who has the same হৃদয় strings as আপনি and they complete you. And there’s nothing that can keep আপনি apart from one another...But what if my one true প্রণয় isn’t here? I mean what if I never find him অথবা her if that’s the case which I hope it’s not. I don’t know what to say but I’m different from the rest...What if there’s no one out there for me?
My name is Sunflower I was born on the first দিন of spring, March 20, 1998. And was born and raised in Maine for all my life so far. I just turned 13. I was born with albinism. Albinism Congenital disorder characterized দ্বারা the complete অথবা partial absence of pigment in the skin, hair and eyes due to absence অথবা defect of an enzyme involved in the production of melanin. At less that’s what my doctor says. In other words I’m albino. I have white skin, white hair and red eye’s. But the sad thing is that I প্রণয় the sun which isn’t good for me. That দিন in the delivery room was the happiest দিন my mother’s life she told me. She ব্যক্ত that she was over joy when she saw my for the first time. She ব্যক্ত that she didn’t care that I had albinism she loved me who I was. She loved that I was different and unique white skin in all. But my father on the other hand didn’t like that I was different. He thought I would be trouble. Something that would just empty out his wallet with all the mediation and doctors and everything else because of my disorder. My mother was the only one how thought I was truly beautiful...Until she was taken away from me...


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alicia386 said:
At first I was wondering where the story was going but that last sentence had me hook. I do believe that this could be fantastical. I would read it of আপনি decide to post it.
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zaynluver687 said:
Luv it totally hooked :)
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SweetHoneyBunny said:
It's a good idea, unique and interesting. I would definitely read it.
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Okay then I'm going to Post it! ^^
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hgfan5602 said:
I প্রণয় it it sounds awesome and epic.
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