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নমস্কার do আপনি like this poem i did about alice and jasper's love?

these two were insepreable
the trust and প্রণয় in his eyes
made her feel নিরাপদ
when she smiled
it brightened his দিন
the thrill of the adventure
the adventure of প্রণয়
was making alice and jasper
fall ever so passionetly inlove
প্রণয় is like the wind
আপনি cant see it
but আপনি can feel it
প্রণয় folowed jasper and alice
because they were destined for eachother

 twilight_lover9 posted বছরখানেক আগে
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TEAM-EDWARDxxx said:
I Like it...

But is okay i guess.. maybe sum আরো stuff bout like ভ্যাম্পায়ার haha that would be interesting..
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আপনি could just go to the request a peom প্রশ্ন and say that u kno! but thanx! for the tip
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Little_Cullen said:
প্রণয় it. Punctuation a bit funny, but the actual লেখা is really cool. I especially like the bit about he makes her feel নিরাপদ and her smile brightens his day. I প্রণয় it. Keep it up!
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thank-u so much
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twilightgirlNo1 said:
i think its great but some of the lines could be a little better.
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twilight0girl said:
it's a perfect poem about them.
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it's a perfect poem about them.
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Twilightpup said:
Its really good , আপনি should make one about Bella and Edward
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emilyemmett said:
That is really good!! আপনি should write another one!! Maybe about the meadow অথবা Jacob and Renesmee অথবা something!
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sessa123 said:
Its not bad, i always thought a poem used to jus have to rhyme but narr its really gud maybe fix up some little thing and maybe have a good thing to rhyme bout, like werewolves, ভ্যাম্পায়ার anything হাঃ হাঃ হাঃ KEEP IT UP HUN XX
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zXwolfgirlXz said:
aww i like it

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Brysis said:
It´s cute ♥
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LovelyDragon said:
Ya, I like it. Some of the lines could be a little better, but it's really cool. :)
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