Does anyone know how to come up with battle scenes? Drawing a big blank on this one. I can describe the area where it is taken place...just not how the actual fight is going to be.

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lermanlover said:
First আপনি will have to figure out how detailed আপনি plan to be with this scene. Do আপনি want to be detailed making it gory? অথবা would আপনি prefer less detailed. If আপনি prefer to be less detailed with the battle then আপনি would have to write about something during the battle. Meaning what is happening around you, what is happening to others in the battle, etc., etc.
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Thank you..I think i have a general idea now.
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axemnas said:
Their are many ways to do it like in my stories i basically describe what i imagine Here's a couple exerts from one of my stories which its primarily with just two people
-He started to run when Sabretooth grabbed his foot. Sam got up slammed his hands on Sabretooth’s ears popping his ear drums. Then Sam punched Sabretooth in the gut. It was like punching a brick wall. Sam held and flapped his hand in pain. Sabretooth chuckled
“Was that the best আপনি can do?”
Sam jumped up spread his wings and started flapping. Sabretooth jumped up and slammed Sam down as if he was a volley ball being spiked. His head hit a razor sharp rock when he hit the ground. Barely conscious Sam stealth fully grabbed his ছুরি out of his pocket he always kept it sharp for an occasion such as this. Sabretooth leaned over and rolled him on his back. Then Sam striked Stabbing Sabretooth in the chest then he did a jogging swoop into the air and he headed for the forest with Sabretooth tight on his heals dodging বৃক্ষ after বৃক্ষ trying to loose Sabretooth"
-Sabretooth running on all fours jumps and starts jumping from বৃক্ষ to বৃক্ষ rapidly nearing his target. Finally he reaches he jumps grabs Sam in a flying tackle. They skidded a couple feet to a halt. Sabretooth gained power over Sam. his hands were griped tightly to the back of Sam’s neck. Sabretooth could easily snap Sam’s neck if he felt like it.
-Sabretooth whispered.
“NO, NO, NO” Sam shouted slamming his foot into Sabretooth’s ribs as hard as he could. Sabretooth dropped him and grabbed him দ্বারা the back of the head and slammed his head hard into the ground. Sabretooth got up and started walking away.
“No” Sam ব্যক্ত faintly grabbing Sabretooth’s foot.
“You don’t give up” he ব্যক্ত with his foot on his chest. Pushing Sam into the ground. Suddenly out of the brush of the woods soldiers appeared like ghosts. "
“Bout time আপনি guys showed up”
-“End of the line” Sabretooth says clamorously and starts approaching. When all the sudden out of no where comes Sam. He wraps his cuffed hands chain around Sabretooth’s neck choking Sabretooth started to দোল reaching backing up nearing the edge they dropped off the cliff.
“SAM!” Anna shouts
the way i see it describe the action,background,setting really the atmosphere in general like a movie what was going on in Saving Private Ryan is a perfect example আপনি just describe what আপনি see as if আপনি অথবা your reader were their from your characters perspective adds an extra twist to it if your telling the story entirely threw someones eyes like in this one episode of M*A*S*H* I'm not sure which season its between 5-11 it tells the story from the patients view.Play around with it is another thing i recommend that's how fightscenes in the চলচ্চিত্র get শীতল and আরো elaborate they push the boundarys.
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 Their are many ways to do it like in my stories i basically describe what i imagine Here's a couple exerts from one of my stories which its primarily with just two people -He started to run when Sabretooth grabbed his foot. Sam got up slammed his hands on Sabretooth’s ears popping his ear drums. Then Sam punched Sabretooth in the gut. It was like punching a brick wall. Sam held and flapped his hand in pain. Sabretooth chuckled “Was that the best আপনি can do?” Sam jumped up spread his wings and started flapping. Sabretooth jumped up and slammed Sam down as if he was a volley ball being spiked. His head hit a razor sharp rock when he hit the ground. Barely conscious Sam stealth fully grabbed his ছুরি out of his pocket he always kept it sharp for an occasion such as this. Sabretooth leaned over and rolled him on his back. Then Sam striked Stabbing Sabretooth in the chest then he did a jogging swoop into the air and he headed for the forest with Sabretooth tight on his heals dodging বৃক্ষ after বৃক্ষ trying to loose Sabretooth" -Sabretooth running on all fours jumps and starts jumping from বৃক্ষ to বৃক্ষ rapidly nearing his target. Finally he reaches he jumps grabs Sam in a flying tackle. They skidded a couple feet to a halt. Sabretooth gained power over Sam. his hands were griped tightly to the back of Sam’s neck. Sabretooth could easily snap Sam’s neck if he felt like it. -Sabretooth whispered. “NO, NO, NO” Sam shouted slamming his foot into Sabretooth’s ribs as hard as he could. Sabretooth dropped him and grabbed him দ্বারা the back of the head and slammed his head hard into the ground. Sabretooth got up and started walking away. “No” Sam ব্যক্ত faintly grabbing Sabretooth’s foot. “You don’t give up” he ব্যক্ত with his foot on his chest. Pushing Sam into the ground. Suddenly out of the brush of the woods soldiers appeared like ghosts. " “Bout time আপনি guys showed up” -“End of the line” Sabretooth says clamorously and starts approaching. When all the sudden out of no where comes Sam. He wraps his cuffed hands chain around Sabretooth’s neck choking Sabretooth started to দোল reaching backing up nearing the edge they dropped off the cliff. “SAM!” Anna shouts the way i see it describe the action,background,setting really the atmosphere in general like a movie what was going on in Saving Private Ryan is a perfect example আপনি just describe what আপনি see as if আপনি অথবা your reader were their from your characters perspective adds an extra twist to it if your telling the story entirely threw someones eyes like in this one episode of M*A*S*H* I'm not sure which season its between 5-11 it tells the story from the patients view.Play around with it is another thing i recommend that's how fightscenes in the চলচ্চিত্র get শীতল and আরো elaborate they push the boundarys.
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sorry its so long i didn't mean to write that much i also recommend আপনি take the উপদেশ from lermanlover they wrote some good stuff
axemnas posted বছরখানেক আগে
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Also to see how a fight scene can be set up i recommend আপনি take a look at the Maximum ride series James Patterson knows how to write things were they basically flow like a movie as আপনি read and picture whats going on
axemnas posted বছরখানেক আগে
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And thank আপনি too.
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