Doubt anybody cares for what I write but I need help! So help.

So I'm লেখা this এমিনেম অনুরাগী fic. and right now its called আরো Than বন্ধু অথবা Just a Dream.

And its about this girl who has an obsession with এমিনেম (Marshall) and she hangs round Shady Records to see if she could see him, and eventually Marshall notices her and is like hey, I got a job for আপনি and w.e and so he gives her a job as his house keeper, and after a while Marshall starts to like the girl (Meleah) and they end up going out, and they সরানো in with each other, have a baby.

but then one day, Meleah sees Marshall with this chick and she assumes that hes cheating on her cause he doesn't seem to care that shes flirting with him... so she leaves to go to a friends, they go out to a club get drunk and Meleah ends up স্নেহ চুম্বন this dude...then her and Marshall end up making up for the fight cause of the flirting, and then the পরবর্তি morning Marshall finds out that Meleah was স্নেহ চুম্বন another guy, so they have a huge fight and break up....

Anyway, I wanted to make a Sequel but I dont know what to call it...

any ideas???
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emmett said:
Well I think that it's a great idea for a story but I think that the guy she falls in প্রণয় with (Eminem) shouldn't be Eminem... maybe a made up singer cuz in my eyes it seems i dunno, kind of weird that it's a well known real singer.

I also think that this kind of story is pretty common. জনপ্রিয় guy falls for normal girl. Girl thinks he's cheating. She goes out and gets drunk. They break up. Maybe if আপনি could put some kind of other twist to the story other than she thinks he's cheating.

As for titles for the sequal, I can't help there sorry. I suck at titles.

Anyway, hope I didn't offend আপনি অথবা upset আপনি অথবা anything. Thats just my honest opinion ^^
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 Well I think that it's a great idea for a story but I think that the guy she falls in প্রণয় with (Eminem) shouldn't be Eminem... maybe a made up singer cuz in my eyes it seems i dunno, kind of weird that it's a well known real singer. I also think that this kind of story is pretty common. জনপ্রিয় guy falls for normal girl. Girl thinks he's cheating. She goes out and gets drunk. They break up. Maybe if আপনি could put some kind of other twist to the story other than she thinks he's cheating. As for titles for the sequal, I can't help there sorry. I suck at titles. Anyway, hope I didn't offend আপনি অথবা upset আপনি অথবা anything. Thats just my honest opinion ^^
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I already wrote the story so yeah....
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Oh ok
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