Would আপনি read this ?

okay so im writting a new story..
its about a 16 বছর old guy named seth . its summer vacation and his mothers old friend wants them to come down to visit for the summer.. so him and his mom go down to visit her farm and it turns out she has a daughter that she didn't tell them about.
her name is ethel and she is 15.
so seth and ethel become বন্ধু but seth notices really weird things about ethel. the first few nights she doesn't come down to eat, she just lies in her বিছানা with a cloth hiding her eyes. sometimes she her eyes turn a bloody red color (shes not a vampire!), and she screams late at night... Barbra (ethels mom) and his mom leave for 3 days to visit another friend that lives close দ্বারা ..and barbra told seth not to bother ethel when she is in her room. seth agree's but the first night he walk into her room without kocking অথবা anything and see's her face down on the bed. he goes over and says her name about 3 times . he starts to get freaked out দ্বারা her not moving so he slightly pushes her.
she flips over and her eyes are a never ending tunnel of black with tears streaming down her face.............................

i don't wanna give her secret away so just leave me an answer
would আপনি read my story??




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Sure :)
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where can i read it???
Liisamyts posted বছরখানেক আগে
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Yes!It makes me feel all excited!
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XDRoseLuvsHP said:
Nice! When আপনি write this, please tell me! It sounds great!
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thanks!! i've already started im on chapter 2 :]
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djlee6 said:
Absolutely! It's unexpected and has a clever twist. I প্রণয় a story that leaves আপনি guessing and wanting more! ^^
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thanks!!! i'll keep writting it then :D thanks again ^.^
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arianaggs said:
it sounds really awesome
and cool
i want to know whats happening to her
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thanks,im glad u like it
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Allieee said:
OH MY GOD YESSSSS!
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:D
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Liisamyts said:
আপনি can post it to link
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Want to read it so badly! :) Sounds really interesting :)
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well idk i don't know where i can post it?
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topazEYEs91 said:
oooo sounds interesting, i would definitley read it... what happens???
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:D once i find somewhere to post it i would let read it :]
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niikkii__xx said:
YESS, I really want to find out what's up with Ethel!
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হাঃ হাঃ হাঃ thanks
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gothgrl3249 said:
This sounds great! Let me know if আপনি post any আরো of it!(=
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okay thanks :D
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E-rock said:
Yeah, thats interesting :D
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thanks :D
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Itsmejordyn411 said:
yeh I would
(:
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yay :D
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Lolly4me2 said:
AH.
BLACK TEARS. TT__TT< Hee hee...

That sounds SO INTENSE. I'd read it for sure! Just tell me when আপনি প্রকাশ new ones!
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:D thanks i'll let u know :]
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*thumbs up* :3
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miyaismykitty said:
only because i fasinated but wut every the hell is wrong with eithel, but i look down apon seth's stupidity, not curiousity, stupidity
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sorry i was grumpy i just walked into the edge of a টেবিল accidentaly, and it really hurt
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haha হাঃ হাঃ হাঃ so আপনি took it out on poor Seth...lol kidding
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হাঃ হাঃ হাঃ yeah im working on seth.... im not good লেখা about boys as the main charater
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sapphire007 said:
I'd read it...it sounds pretty awesome
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thanks :]
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Delilah_Scruggs said:
Yeah! You've got me dying of curosity here!
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হাঃ হাঃ হাঃ yay thanks ^.^
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ChrisMisMINE said:
Oh GOD im dying it sounds SO GOOD!!!! HURRY UP AND FINISH WRITIN IT!!!! not to be mean অথবা anything
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হাঃ হাঃ হাঃ im glad u like it :D
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have u finished it yet???
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BatBogeyHex said:
sounds very interesting. i would like to read more. আপনি did a good job leaving it a cliff hanger! let me know the details like the when and where. peace!
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im glad u liked it! i just finished chapter 2 :]
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drusillah said:
I wouldn't, sorry, because I have a fear of black eyes and a vivid imagination. But other than that, I'm sure it'll be interesting for others :)
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werewolflover said:
Oh my gosh,OF COURSE!!!!That sounds like a story I would definatly enjoy!♥
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tournesol said:
absolutly... it sound really interesting!! and it leave me wanting more...=)
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gain7_gun said:
hell yes!please tell me when u start it.

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zomeister said:
YES !!!!!!! Please write the end of the story !
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