In this book that I plan on publishing, should I kill off one of the main character's best friends?

So, I wrote this story a few years পূর্বে and it was such a hit with my বন্ধু and other people that I decided to re-write it and try to প্রকাশ it. In the story, one of the main characters, Katrina, goes to save her friend's life, James, from a burning building. Instead of a happy ending and he survives, I let him die. I didn't plan on it, but I thought it would be better drama and less of a clice-ending when all the character's are happy. Now that I'm re-writing it to publish, I was wondering if it would be better for the public if I keep him alive. অথবা should I keep it how it is?
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Do they end up together?
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No :[ I considered it for a little while, but I think it'll be better if they have a tight, unbreakable brother/sister relationship. :]
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Night-Sky said:
Hm...I don't know...I think It depends on weather অথবা not the reactions of the characters about the death are well written অথবা not...
Otherwise, keep it the same! I প্রণয় killing off characters and it add in an unexpected sort of twist!
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OK thank you! :] I'll try to write it as best as I can! Even back two অথবা three years পূর্বে when my লেখা wasn't as mature as now, some of my বন্ধু still cried. So...that's a good sign, in a way, right? :]
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Well...Yes, I guess that is a good sign. Mostly. I mean, I've got বন্ধু who would cryat nothing in a book, but yeah. *Should* Be a good sign :p
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haha ok thank আপনি :]
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K5-HOWL said:
yes but it depends on how much he is in the story cause some people like the side charater better then the main charater and u r probly going to haft to turn up the sound to hear this song.
its called "Heaven's not enough"
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Her best friend is in the story pretty much a lot in part three of it (there are three parts in my novel. part three is that longest i think). And thanks for the song! :]
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your elcome
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