An idea popped into my head the other দিন and its been playing like a little movie in my head ever since. I really need to know if its any good, অথবা if the idea has already been used. Also I need উপদেশ for the characters and their names. I also appreciate constructive criticism and grammar and spelling. The names are temporary. I've never written a book that is completely in the present tense so please help me catch any tense mistakes! Um, oh yeah. It doesn't have a শিরোনাম yet so if আপনি have any suggestions just let me know!
(: Thanks!
-Carly
The story is jumbled a bit. It is because the characters are experiencing tough times and can't think straight, so since they tell it, the story is a little jumpy.
Here is a a short প্রিভিউ of the 1st chapter to an unnamed story in the making along with a summary of the book.
"Good morning," I hear the principal say as she does every day. Normally, I would politely respond to that with a "Thank আপনি Mrs. Monrale, আপনি too," but today I am pissed. How can she say that?! It was awful of her to say such a thing! It is most definitely not a good morning, I mutter to myself as she is all the way down the hallway now.
I pace around, taking a long route to my locker where, as always, the two cheerleaders on either side of my locker are cheerfully chatting. Normally I would say "Excuse me," but today I'm not normal. I can't bring myself to say WHY I'm so abnormal today. I'm not ready to get into that yet. Today is awful, life is just a dismay, people are always in your way, the principal is disgusting, the cheerleaders are horrid, and I am mad - mad at everyone and everything, everywhere.
That is a প্রিভিউ of chapter one, in the the female protagonist, Josepheenah's point of view.
Here is a summary of the whole book:
Ever since Josepheenah ব্যক্ত the words "I wish you'd just die, Eli," she has never stopped regretting them. Jo and Eli really got along until he decided to fall in প্রণয় with her. He loved the pool of brown in her eyes and the black mess of hair that she had always hated. Eli found her laugher to be সঙ্গীত to his ears. Her voice was melodic and always on key. Jo always knew what to say to him, until she says the last words Eli ever heard her say. She took none of this seriously. But Eli would do anything Jo wanted. They were at her house at the time, so when Jo got up to get them a snack, he gave her what she asked for. Jo comes back to messages written on her mirror in blood, and balled up প্রণয় notes Eli never had the guts to give to her. Read the novel to get the story from both sides, and how everything turns out in the end.
Thanks for helping me out! x :)
(: Thanks!
-Carly
The story is jumbled a bit. It is because the characters are experiencing tough times and can't think straight, so since they tell it, the story is a little jumpy.
Here is a a short প্রিভিউ of the 1st chapter to an unnamed story in the making along with a summary of the book.
"Good morning," I hear the principal say as she does every day. Normally, I would politely respond to that with a "Thank আপনি Mrs. Monrale, আপনি too," but today I am pissed. How can she say that?! It was awful of her to say such a thing! It is most definitely not a good morning, I mutter to myself as she is all the way down the hallway now.
I pace around, taking a long route to my locker where, as always, the two cheerleaders on either side of my locker are cheerfully chatting. Normally I would say "Excuse me," but today I'm not normal. I can't bring myself to say WHY I'm so abnormal today. I'm not ready to get into that yet. Today is awful, life is just a dismay, people are always in your way, the principal is disgusting, the cheerleaders are horrid, and I am mad - mad at everyone and everything, everywhere.
That is a প্রিভিউ of chapter one, in the the female protagonist, Josepheenah's point of view.
Here is a summary of the whole book:
Ever since Josepheenah ব্যক্ত the words "I wish you'd just die, Eli," she has never stopped regretting them. Jo and Eli really got along until he decided to fall in প্রণয় with her. He loved the pool of brown in her eyes and the black mess of hair that she had always hated. Eli found her laugher to be সঙ্গীত to his ears. Her voice was melodic and always on key. Jo always knew what to say to him, until she says the last words Eli ever heard her say. She took none of this seriously. But Eli would do anything Jo wanted. They were at her house at the time, so when Jo got up to get them a snack, he gave her what she asked for. Jo comes back to messages written on her mirror in blood, and balled up প্রণয় notes Eli never had the guts to give to her. Read the novel to get the story from both sides, and how everything turns out in the end.
Thanks for helping me out! x :)
A family who lives on a boat
Doesn’t want land but water to float.
Sometimes afraid to sink down
Of many holes they have around.
All what’s left is hope and faith.
A girl on the নৌকা is very sick,
But the thoughtless father’s brain never gave a kick.
Never thought about what would happen,
That’s why they’re হারিয়ে গেছে with a big reason.
All what’s left is 35 feet of rope and faith.
Believing in your heart,
There is a big feeling where to start
Never give it up nor never have enough.
আপনি know what আপনি want,
আপনি know some things that আপনি can’t have.
All what’s left is hope and faith.
Doesn’t want land but water to float.
Sometimes afraid to sink down
Of many holes they have around.
All what’s left is hope and faith.
A girl on the নৌকা is very sick,
But the thoughtless father’s brain never gave a kick.
Never thought about what would happen,
That’s why they’re হারিয়ে গেছে with a big reason.
All what’s left is 35 feet of rope and faith.
Believing in your heart,
There is a big feeling where to start
Never give it up nor never have enough.
আপনি know what আপনি want,
আপনি know some things that আপনি can’t have.
All what’s left is hope and faith.
It's soft like a blanket
It's cold like ice
We can't help but gravitate towards it
Even though it's not always nice
It gives us scaly pets
And sharp toothed nightmares
অথবা clucking little friends
It cools us off during the summer
Let's us স্কেইট on it during winter
Makes আপনি laugh with your friends
অথবা steals your breath
When it covers you
It refreshs আপনি
It cools you
Warms your toes
Tickles you
Freezes আপনি
Unforgiving ocean
Deep dark lake
Roaring river
Stale creek
Please with all ado
Let me thank আপনি too
It's cold like ice
We can't help but gravitate towards it
Even though it's not always nice
It gives us scaly pets
And sharp toothed nightmares
অথবা clucking little friends
It cools us off during the summer
Let's us স্কেইট on it during winter
Makes আপনি laugh with your friends
অথবা steals your breath
When it covers you
It refreshs আপনি
It cools you
Warms your toes
Tickles you
Freezes আপনি
Unforgiving ocean
Deep dark lake
Roaring river
Stale creek
Please with all ado
Let me thank আপনি too
