what's your opinion about my জীবন্ত ?

eji is a 13 বছর old boy his father was a powerful protector but when eji was 2 his father dispersers when eji gets old he wants to be like his father he goes to a camp to passes the exam he meets two siblings jon and his little sister leiyla who has a curse in her left eye gon wants to revenge his family and বন্ধু death killed দ্বারা an organization named dark council his bigger sister was with them gon and leiyla have special asssasin eye after making বন্ধু eji and his বন্ধু passes the exam to became protectors of earth and they discover new powers they make বন্ধু they will make rivals leiyla must protect her self from the enemies that want her eji will soon discover that he is a dragon host what will they do ?
i am waiting your opinions