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Okay so the উত্তর I was প্রদত্ত in my last প্রশ্ন (link) mostly states that the neck looks awkward. I've changed it but I don't know if it still looks awkward অথবা not.

Please tell me if it still looks weird. I've also made the image a bit smoother thanks to info someone from deviantart gave me.

Here's a link if the image is too small: link